Writers Workshop: Post #2

            As the young boy boarded  the strange man's vehicle, he rapidly tasted the scent of any child's favorite food group,sweets. The hunchback parked in a deserted forest and lurched towards the back of the ornate, congested of candy vehicle. Before, Billy, the five year old sweetie, could not identify the identity of the man, but now it had become clear, it was his "father." All of a sudden, Billy's father ousted Billy from his way to tear of a mask and reveal his true identity was a sociopath kidnapper. But that didn't scare Billy, all he wanted to do was ask, "May I please have some candy?" 

Writers Workshop #1: Scensory Details

            "Onto the stage may we please have all of the 11 and under Grand Line competitors," Gary Pate announced as we, The Jill Justin Dance Alliance strutted onto the largest stage on the east coast. This was it, the moment every Battle of the Stars contestant had been waiting for. Who would be the title of World Champions?

            As we stood gripping one another's hand, our knuckles turned white as ghosts in anxiousness. The entire room was silenced as fourth and third runner ups were called. At this point during the awards ceremony, you could smell the cooking taste of nervousness surface the air."Second runner up goes to... Scream!" Gary proclaimed wide-eyed" Now, listen carefully.The next dance I'm about to call is the first runner up and the studio that did not have their dance called will be the champions." We shook in the uneasiness that congested the convention center. "Congratulations Gaga, you are the first runner ups. This means, congratulations to The Jill Justin Dance Alliance that performed, Fashionista!" Gary Pate excitedly exclaimed his final words of the day. We, The Jill Justin Dance Alliance were champions!


Click the link below to view our dance:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bVYv6AYt-gs